Draft my holiday

Draft My holiday

 “Yay” Im there  Im in Auckland. I went to Auckland to see
my dad and his girlfriend.

When

Were/What

I stayed in Glenfield. Glenfield is cool because
it has pools called Glenfield pools.

I went down to Auckland to see my dad because he
is going to move to Australia.

In Auckland the weather was nice and hot so
we could have a swim in the pool.  

My dad works at carpet court and his girlfriend works at pak n save.

My Dad’s  name is Jeff and his girlfriends name is shistala.  

Conclusion

I love being in Auckland l love it#